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Experiment No2 - critique required, please

in Anything Eriba-related Tue May 12, 2015 2:25 pm
by Pepé Le Pew | 2.752 Posts

I've attached another pencil drawing, and I'd like people's opinions. It's the Puck 230 we used to have at a site in Herefordshire. I'm not fishing for compliments - there might not be any, after all; what I need to know is whether or not I've captured the character of these little vans.

It seemed to me that the very best people to ask were those who own them, so please hit me with it. If you don't like it, tell me why you don't like it.

After all, the only truly daft question is the one you never ask.

Thanks

Pete

Puck 230 at Shobdon rz.jpg - Bild entfernt (keine Rechte)

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RE: Experiment No2 - critique required, please

in Anything Eriba-related Tue May 12, 2015 2:35 pm
by Morphy | 973 Posts

Hiya Pete,
I am in no way an art expert but to me that looks bob on really nice and yes you can in my opinion relate to the character of the Eriba.
Morphy


Eriba Puck name P4 year 2000 pushing a Honda Crv 2.2 diesel residing in sunny Lancashire.
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RE: Experiment No2 - critique required, please

in Anything Eriba-related Tue May 12, 2015 2:39 pm
by Aaron Calder | 3.834 Posts

Una Stubbs would have coloured it in.


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RE: Experiment No2 - critique required, please

in Anything Eriba-related Tue May 12, 2015 2:42 pm
by hampshireman (deleted)
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Hah! She would have drawn a big white box Brian. This is a superb piece of draghtsmanship. Smashing Pete.


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RE: Experiment No2 - critique required, please

in Anything Eriba-related Tue May 12, 2015 2:46 pm
by Aaron Calder | 3.834 Posts

Don't encourage him, Derek, he's only showing off.


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RE: Experiment No2 - critique required, please

in Anything Eriba-related Tue May 12, 2015 3:18 pm
by hampshireman (deleted)
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I do take it you are joking Brian. LOL


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RE: Experiment No2 - critique required, please

in Anything Eriba-related Tue May 12, 2015 3:38 pm
by Pepé Le Pew | 2.752 Posts

Quote: hampshireman wrote in post #6
I do take it you are joking Brian. LOL
If only it were true.

I'm mortified, but not surprised. What scrap of confidence I had lies in tatters.

The worst of it is that I just ordered a brand new smock and beret . Just as well I didn't opt for the small folding stool and easel combo.

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RE: Experiment No2 - critique required, please

in Anything Eriba-related Tue May 12, 2015 4:10 pm
by Poptop320 | 2.634 Posts

Another masterpiece, well done Pete.....


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RE: Experiment No2 - critique required, please

in Anything Eriba-related Tue May 12, 2015 4:51 pm
by crow (deleted)
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Thank Goodness! you have dragged your light out from under the bushel.
Are you going to offer these terrific pencil drawings to the general public
Pete?


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RE: Experiment No2 - critique required, please

in Anything Eriba-related Tue May 12, 2015 5:09 pm
by T & C (deleted)
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Hi Pete, Yes I think you have captured the character of our Puck 230's very well indeed and I think your attention to detail (something I'm not good at myself) is enviable. I'm going to study some of your technique for my next picture which will be a pair of Eribas (a Puck & a Triton nuzzling up together) - wish me luck!

Tony


ERIBA Puck L 230 pushing a Citroen C4 Picasso


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RE: Experiment No2 - critique required, please

in Anything Eriba-related Tue May 12, 2015 5:21 pm
by Pepé Le Pew | 2.752 Posts

Quote: T & C wrote in post #10
...wish me luck!
Of course I do.

And thank you for your kind words

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RE: Experiment No2 - critique required, please

in Anything Eriba-related Tue May 12, 2015 9:54 pm
by Frantone (deleted)
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Love it!


No, really love it!


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RE: Experiment No2 - critique required, please

in Anything Eriba-related Wed May 13, 2015 10:34 am
by hampshireman (deleted)
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Tony have you any examples of your art work we can see please?


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RE: Experiment No2 - critique required, please

in Anything Eriba-related Wed May 13, 2015 1:07 pm
by Aaron Calder | 3.834 Posts

The only thing Tony can draw is his pension, Derek. (You did mean Frantone?)


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RE: Experiment No2 - critique required, please

in Anything Eriba-related Wed May 13, 2015 1:34 pm
by T & C (deleted)
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If you mean me Derek the only example that is Eriba related is my profile picture which is - well - nothing special. I tend to draw (for my own amusement and the grandchildren) butterflies, the odd wild animal and scenes from our village but I stress my skills are limited and the results reflect that.

T & C. Tony


ERIBA Puck L 230 pushing a Citroen C4 Picasso


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